I'm so thrilled to see so many pitches getting feedback! Good Job Pitchers! Good Job Critiquers! I thought you might like a chance to put your revised pitch out there, so here's the blog post to do that.
IF you haven't pitched yet, add to the Submission Post.
IF you don't know what's going on, The Guidelines Post will explain it.
IF you've already pitched on the Submission Post, and gotten feedback, You can put a Revised version of your pitch on this post - same format, EXCEPT put at the bottom whether you want more feedback. For example:
AUTHOR: Coach Garrett
PB TITLE: Alien Food
WORD COUNT: 300
PITCH: Alfie is an alien tot who stomps his tentacles at the idea of eating Earth grown food. YUCKERS! But after a few bites and mishaps, he realizes that "smashed toes and grey feet" isn't so bad after all.
(More Feedback Please) OR (No Feedback Wanted - Thanks for your help!)
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